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Hispanic Heritage Book Review: "Chloe Vega and the Agents of Magic," Book 1 by Leslie Adame

Sep 1
4 min read

Hispanic Heritage Month may be two weeks away, but why wait to celebrate? Today, I’m diving into a fantastic read that brings Hispanic culture to life through an unforgettable, magical lens.


The Hook: Undocumented & Unseen

Author Leslie Adame holding her book Chloe Vega and the Agents of Magic
Author Leslie Adame with her book Chloe Vega and the Agents of Magic

Leslie Adame poured her heart and soul into this wildly imaginative urban tale, and she did so to address the decentralization of our country. In her own words, “The story itself may be fiction, but Chloe’s determination to reunite her family is a portrayal I know many could relate to.”


This book is action-packed, from the time Chloe’s parents are taken until readers turn the last page. Though the target audience is middle-grade and teens, fans of the fantasy genre, no matter their age, will be sucked into the Unseen world and all its wonder, and just ahead of Hispanic Heritage Month!


The World-Building: Discovering the Unseen

A main chunk of the story takes place in an Unseen part of America, where magic exists outside of non-magicals’ purview, thanks to a powerful agent of magic, and a very special gem—one of only three. The big bad in this story doesn’t want to remain hidden, though. He and his followers kidnap Chloe’s parents and do everything in their power to shine the spotlight on the Unseen world.


Chloe and her family live in East L.A., where other parts of the story take place, and where I grew up the first eleven years of my life. My East L.A. background, along with two years of Spanish classes, helped me understand some of the Spanish in this book. It’s not overwhelming, though, and doesn’t make the story difficult to follow. Ultimately, it’s a wonderful read for Hispanic Heritage Month—offering young readers a story where they can see their own culture reflected, while inviting every reader along for an exciting adventure.


The magical heritage trope is strong in this story, with a little “chosen one” thrown in for good measure (Chloe’s sister doesn’t possess magic, nor do her friends’ siblings). With magic wands called Shifters, a hidden magical society scattered all over the globe, and an academy created solely for magical youth, Adame has built a world that rivals others of its kind, with its simple, easy-to-follow magical system.


Pacing, Plot, and the "Editor’s Perspective"

In terms of pacing, Leslie Adame’s Chloe Vega and the Agents of Magic hits the sweet spot. It’s a race-against-time but also lets you catch your breath. Namely because poor Chloe needs to catch hers occasionally. The rhythm is balanced, each of the characters unique, never confusing one for another, and the story stays on track from start to finish.


As an editor, I look closely at the "bones" of a story, and there is much to marvel at.

  • Character Arcs: The author did very well here. Chloe didn’t believe in magic at all in the beginning, and the gradual change in her way of thinking was impeccable. She has a nemesis at the academy, and this character’s arc is subtle, which is sometimes a difficult feat, but Adame nailed it. There are also a couple of possible romantic interests for Chloe, and they each have such vastly different personalities, with one challenging her in ways I know will come into play later. I’m on his team, by the way.

  • The Reveal: Someone in this story is not who they appear to be, and usually when this happens in a book, I can guess who it is. Not this time. I was surprised, and you will be too! This is one of the most difficult areas in storytelling for an author—do it wrong and you lose your audience because they don’t like predictability—but Adame wove this character’s arc meticulously and landed the reveal expertly.

  • The Conclusion: Leslie Adame is open about there being more books in this series, and she ties up all loose ends by the end of this one. It’s satisfying when an author does this. She left room for growth in the series and with the characters; so much in fact that this book series could go on forever. And I think it should.


The Technical Details

The overall flow of the book is excellent, with flawless sentence structure, natural scene breaks, and seamless chapter transitions. There were no roadblocks readers could get hung up on—no missing words or typos that I noticed—so I never stumbled.


From a production standpoint, the cover art is gorgeous, and even the details in the background play a role. Both the cover and the interior layout of the physical edition were free of production artifacts that might discourage readers from picking up the book or disrupt the narrative flow once they’ve begun reading. The production team should get a pat on the back for a job well done!

Personal Reflection: The Heart of the Matter

I know that I should be talking more about the heart of the matter—immigration and undocumented folks being ripped from their families. That is a vital theme in this book, and a deeply relevant topic during Hispanic Heritage Month, but what stands out to me most is the world-building. I am an editor, and one of my specialties is the fantasy genre. So, when I read a really good fantasy novel, I can’t help but let the world itself take center stage, no matter the moral of the story. And Adame has crafted such a believable fantasy world that I know it’ll make young readers pick up a wooden spoon and call it their Shifter!


As for the moral of the story, though, it’s all about family, whether it’s heritage or chosen, and how we would do anything for them. I know I would do anything for my family! It doesn’t matter whether someone lives here in the U.S. legally or not, families shouldn’t be ripped apart, and that’s the heart of the matter. As the tagline says:

“The most powerful magic is familia.”

The Verdict: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐


Best for: Young readers who love the Harry Potter series and other magical academy series, along with magical heritage


Release Date: September 16, 2025


Genre: Middle-Grade Fantasy/Family/Social Themes/Hispanic Heritage


Disclosure: A digital copy of this book was provided by HarperCollins, care of Books Forward, "a full-service author publicity and book marketing firm," in exchange for an honest review.

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